This sentence, has too many commas, that I like to put in my sentences, so do many other people.
We really need to learn that commas are not to be used for a pause, like we tend to do. For that we need a dash, because a comma is not required. These sentences, are not to be exempt.
As stated by the Grammarly website: “Of all the punctuation marks in English, this one is perhaps the most abused and misused. And it’s no wonder. There are lots of rules about comma usage, and often the factors that determine whether you should use one are quite subtle. But fear not! Below, you’ll find guidance for the trickiest comma questions”